He made a grunt and attempted to move his tightfisted left hand, before the gurgle of his final breath escaped his lips in a collapsing sigh, his eyes more cold and lifeless than ever before. His hand relaxed and a slip of paper could be seen.
Writing tips: If you're struggling with writing a character, write 20 things that the reader will never know about your character. These will naturally bleed into your writing and provide a richness even though you don't share the detail.
When people read 18 they stop aging until they meet their soul mate so they can grow old together. You've been 18 for at least 20 years.<<<<<<<<<or you keep killing off your soul mate so that you may reign immortal
Dialogue prompt -- "Why is he bleeding?" "Because he's an idiot." "I didn't know that idiocy caused people to just start spontaneously bleeding from the nose." "I think it's a new phenomenon."<<<< this isn't a dialogue prompt. This is from Allegiant duh